First attempt at an intro for EcigJuice review

Update: I think the next one I did is much better. 
I know it is not the best will probably take weeks more. But this is my first attempt. I know it looks really similar to the one I did for the Forum across the world. Hopefully that will change soon. What do you think of it? What can I do to improve it? :P LOL I forgot the comments are still not working. I need to fix that for the contest I am running.  I have a couple of reviews ready hopefully I will get a chance to post them soon.